Wyneco · Stage 3 · August batch · v19 — Jec’s 3 Sep 23:15 ticks recorded
v19: w3_7 + mi_g4 approved — the full approved set is in your Drive folder.
Every graphic you killed is out (listed under each ad). Every one you noted is rebuilt to the note — the orange strip under each card quotes what changed. w3_7 (the red-flag loop) and mi_g4 (the zero-VAT glow graph) are APPROVED and in your Drive relink folder. Every ticked graphic to date is in the folder — download the new files and relink the Stage 3 GFX bin. Animated graphics loop as real clips over the footage, so you can judge the word-by-word, row-by-row and count-up motion, not guess it from a still. Fonts are varied on purpose: Sora for the numbers, Urbanist for the claims, Outfit on the cards, Poppins for labels.
End cards: all four kept, phone numbers off, air-conditioning off the livery split. CTAs unchanged from v3 (no notes) — say the word and they go gradient too.
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HERO 6 — Save £1,200 or We Pay You Back
Wyneco — HERO 6 £1,200 Guarantee — Stage2 August 2026
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- 0.1sLet me put a number on it.
- 2.1s£1,200 saved with solar in your first year.
- 5.0sOr we'll pay you back the difference.
- 6.7sMost installers wouldn't dare make such big promises.
- 9.2sBut because we've done hundreds of products and our team is fully qualified, we know what system will work right on your home.
- 15.7sWe've been working in the field for over 20 years, so we can fit the right system for your situation.
- 20.4sMy name is Elliot and between myself and the team we have decades of experience in electrical and roofing.
- 25.6sI myself got more than 20 years experience in the field.
- 26.2sI myself have got over 20 years experience in the field.
- 29.1sWe know the difference between the right system and cheap kit and that difference could be worth thousands to you.
- 33.9sgonna get this one we come in we tell you uh we come in with your survey we tell you exactly what we're gonna do and we execute it at high standards oh my god we come in we come in we perform a survey tell you exactly what we're going to do and we install to the highest standards we have more than 20 years experience our jobs are tidy and second to none
- 39.5sAnd we build a system around that, not something off-the-shelf.
- 42.5sWe're a local business and we design bespoke solar systems for all customers.
- 46.8sClick the link below and see if your property qualifies.
- ⚠ 25.6s: a 0.5s Sorin feed ('I myself got more than 20 years…') sits before Elliot's own line.
- ⚠ 33.9–39.2s: a messy multi-speaker feed block ('gonna get this one we come in we tell you…') is INSIDE the spine — sounds like Sorin coaching, needs a listen.
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- 0.1sWe do solar differently.
- 1.2sHere's something you won't get from an online solar company.
- 4.3sYou can come and actually meet us.
- 5.9sWe've got a proper showroom right here in Essex in Clacton-on-Sea.
- 9.1sCome in, meet the team, see the products, the panels, the batteries, the inverters.
- 13.4sAnd you can ask us any questions before you commit to anything.
- 16.0sWe're a dedicated team with more than 20 years experience.
- 19.1sPeople in the area like working with us because we keep everything in-house and personal.
- 23.1sYou're not dealing with a faceless company where you never deal with the same person twice.
- 27.7sI feel like something that was missing within the industry, certainly locally in the tender in Essex area, is somewhere that a customer can go, see a product, meet the people who are installing it, rather than it being ad after ad online where you see sometimes quotes that are too good to be true.
- 43.3sBy having over 20 years experience electrically, I feel that creating solar...
- 44.3sWithin building the company, we feel like we're providing a service that will help the local people trust solar, believe in solar, being able to come in and meet us.
- 53.1sAll the latest qualifications have been gained in order to be able to provide the highest level of...
- 57.1sEverything's in-house and we're not going anywhere.
- 59.6sSolar is a huge decision.
- 1:01Make it with people you've actually shaken hands with.
- 1:03Click the link below, fill out the form, and pop over to see us in the showroom.
- ℹ 66.8s is ~2× the 30–40s scripted-ad target; 27.7–43.3s is one 16s unscripted ramble — candidate for a trim before GFX go on.
Removed per your notes: h9_1 claim, h9_3 carousel, h9_2 stylised map (killed in v7).
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- 2.8sCheck our online reviews and our customers tell the story.
- 5.4sOkay, my name is Elliot and our team at Winneco have helped countless customers make the switch over to solar.
- 10.2sWe're a local family business based here in Essex.
- 12.8sPeople in the area like working with us because we keep everything in-house and personal.
- 16.8sWe design your system, we have a team of fitters to install your system, and you'll see the same faces throughout from start to finish, so it all feels as one.
- 24.7sWe have 20 years experience and our jobs are always tidy and second to none.
- 28.4sThat's why people happily recommend us to their neighbors.
- 31.2sWe've had no problems with Elliot.
- 33.3sEverything's been done perfectly.
- 35.3sNo mess.
- 36.2sAnd we'd recommend him to anybody else that's looking for solar panels or any electric works.
- 43.5sClick the link below, get an honest price, and get a job well done.
- ℹ Spine opens at 2.8s (first 2.8s silent/lead-in) — check the hook lands on the cut.
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- 0.1sIsn't it ridiculous that people make solar purchases worth thousands and thousands of pounds over the phone or via email without even meeting anybody?
- 1.5sIsn't it ridiculous that people make solar purchases worth thousands and thousands of pounds over the phone or via email without even meeting anybody?
- 7.4sWe're different.
- 8.3sCome down here, meet us at Winneco in the showroom, and you get to meet us face-to-face.
- 12.8sWe'll be able to talk you through the design, talk you through the installation process, and what happens after.
- 17.4sThis is something that 90% of solar installers don't have, and that is a showroom.
- 21.0sWe've got a proper showroom right here in Essex in Clacton-on-Sea.
- 24.0sWe've got a certification up on the wall showing all the qualifications, all the relevant qualifications in order to install solar and batteries to the highest.
- 32.8shighest means.
- 33.9sWe've got a solar panel up on the roof with bird proofing around it again just to show customers almost within touch what a panel, what things that we're talking about in regard to a design or even on the installation side of things so they can see what they're getting.
- 48.6sHey, listen, solar is a huge decision to make and that is completely understandable.
- 52.1sRather than trying to trawl through online quotes and seeing which one's best and which one's right for you, come down here to the showroom and we can sit and have a discussion and work out your design that's perfect for your property.
- ⚠ 0.1–6.9s: the hook line appears TWICE back-to-back in the beat map ('Isn't it ridiculous…' ×2) — probably a clip-boundary artefact, but listen for a real double.
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- 0.3sThis is a system we installed two years ago for John and Marion.
- 3.5sThe self-built property, they had air source heat pump on the design.
- 7.0sFrom that, their electricity costs were going to be very high.
- 9.8sSo suggested was solar panels with battery storage.
- 12.4sThey've got 10 kilowatts of battery storage.
- 14.6sThe estimated cost of electricity was going to be £4,000 a year off the initial design just with air source heat pump.
- 20.6sAnd by installing the solar and the batteries, we've managed to reduce that by 70%, 75% to just £1,000 a year.
- 27.7sOkay so we met Elliot and he gave us a quote and we spent a lot of time with him talking and I felt that he felt as passionate about our home as we did so that is why we went with Elliot.
- 40.4sHaving had Elliot do all the work for us, we would recommend him for anybody, trustworthy, no problems whatsoever.
- ✓ Clean: Elliot's setup → Marion's why → John's recommendation. No feeds detected.
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- 0.0sA normal bill would be about 4,000 pounds and we're down to like 1,000 pound.
- 5.5sright um originally we did try and got a price from other people but they were too dear so we got in touch with elliot who was doing our electrics for our bungalow
- 11.7sright um originally we did try and got a price from other people but they were too dear so we got in touch with elliot who was doing our electrics for our bungalow
- 16.9sand he came up with the idea of putting the solar panels on the stables and putting a heat pump in.
- 22.1sand he came up with the idea of putting the solar panels on the stables and putting a heat pump in.
- 23.9sWe've got storage batteries inside the utility room as well.
- 24.4sWe've got storage batteries inside the utility room as well.
- 28.3sJust the good parts.
- 28.8sAs Elliot was sorting out the electrics for us, we thought we'd get him to do the solar panels.
- 33.5sAs Elliot was sorting out the electrics for us, we thought we'd get him to do the solar panels.
- 36.3sWe've had no problems with Elliot.
- 38.4sEverything's been done perfectly.
- 40.4sNo mess.
- 41.3sAnd we'd recommend him to anybody else that's looking for solar panels or any electric works.
- 48.2sWell, I know that I can rely on it perfectly all right.
- 53.8sAnd it's not going to cost me a fortune.
- 55.6scut that out you could say that like you know if you're like a homeowner i encourage you to uh make the step and contact elliott he's a reliable installer and he'll do a good job for you right okay as the homeowner of this property
- 58.0sHaving had Elliot do all the work for us, we would recommend him for anybody, trustworthy, no problems whatsoever.
- ⚠ 55.6–57.6s: a Sorin feed ('cut that out… you could say…') is INSIDE the spine.
- ⚠ Four lines appear doubled in the beat map (5.5/11.7 · 16.9/22.1 · 23.9/24.4 · 28.8/33.5) — likely boundary artefacts, but 67s is long for a testimonial (target 20–30s).
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The spine as it exists right now (click to open)
- 0.0sWhatever you do, don't rush into solar.
- 1.3sThe wrong system on the wrong roof is an expensive mistake.
- 4.1sAnd we get called often to fix mistakes like that.
- 5.2sAnd we get called often to fix mistakes like that.
- 6.5sYou need to make sure you get the right system fitted for your property.
- 9.8sWe know this because we've done hundreds of projects.
- 11.9sAnd we know the difference between what the customer think they may need and what they actually need.
- 15.9sI myself have got over 20 years experience in the field.
- 18.4sWe're on the ground for every job from first visit to switch on.
- 18.8sOkay, my name is Elliot and our team at Winneco have helped countless customers make the switch over to solar.
- 24.1sNo matter your property type, no matter your property type, detached, semi-detached, bungalow, EV charger, no EV charger, heat pump, no heat pump, don't panic, we'll design a system to suit you.
- 31.6sNo matter your property type, no matter your property type, detached, semi-detached, bungalow, EV charger, no EV charger, heat pump, no heat pump, don't panic, we'll design a system to suit you.
- 32.5sNo matter your property type, no matter your property type, detached, semi-detached, bungalow, EV charger, no EV charger, heat pump, no heat pump, don't panic, we'll design a system to suit you.
- 33.9sWe'll come out, carry out a survey, check your current usage, and give you an honest price.
- 35.6sWe'll come out, carry out a survey, check your current usage, and give you an honest price.
- ⚠ 18.4s: a 0.5s Sorin feed ('We're on the ground for every job…') between Elliot's lines.
- ℹ 'No matter your property type…' shows ×3 in the beat map across 24–34s — check for a real repeat.
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Misc shelf · mi_g4 NEW in v18
Misc — glow graphs, two carousels, three grid blanks
The generic shelf, as approved (mi_g2 carries the v7 subtitle). The three graphs and the two carousels render with alpha (ProRes 4444) to sit over footage; the three grid backgrounds are opaque full-frame blanks meant to sit under other graphics. Previews here are over a neutral dark plate, not footage.
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The sign-off
Full-screen end cards
ec_1, ec_2 and ec_4: the animated 16:9 rebuilds are approved — the mp4s are in your Drive folder. ec_3 stays the square v7 rebuild (no note on it).
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